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"Bugger..."
That was all I could say as I entered Kohona, Village Hidden in the Leaves, through the gate. Thousands of homes and buildings and the famous HOKAGE mountain towered in front of me.
"Now what type of accent is that?" Someone asked, I shrieked and jumped straight up in the air.
"BUGGER!" I slammed down onto the hard concrete...on my BOOTY! "POXY, BUGGER, SHIT!!" I started swearing.
"Whoopsy, sorry, but that was kinda funny!" The boy laughed, I looked up at him (the sun was in my eyes)
"Holy bickie, Roxas?!" I squealed...'I finally found him!'
"Who? I'm the famous Naruto Uzumaki!" The boy laughed, I shielded my eyes and squinted.
"Oh, oppsy-daisey...I thought you were someone else!" Naruto looked at me.
"How do you talk?" Naruto asked me
"Australian, no duh, nice trackey-dacks!" I said, pointing at his pants "Orange is a good color on you!"
"Uhm, thanks?" Naruto said, holding out his hand. I took it and pulled myself up.
"It's a nice comment, dumby!" I laughed, Naruto just blushed. "Hey, can you point me out to the ninja academy?" I asked.
Naruto re-adjusted his goggles and sighed. I put my hands on my hips and looked him straight in the eyes.
"'Scuse me, I asked a question!" I poked him, Naruto took my hand "ARGH!" I yelled
"Follow me!" Naruto said, I just started fuming.
"Why the hell are you holding my hand?" I almost shrieked, Naruto just laughed and rolled his eyes.
"I need someones protection, Iruka-Sensei will kill me as soon as we get to the academy!"
"Who now...why?" I asked, Naruto just kept dragging me towards the large academy. "Oh, I see a swing!" I chimed, eyeing the swing hanign from the large tree.
"You can swing later!" Naruto said, I pried my fingers out of his and stuck my tongue out at him. I started walking towards the academy. "Aren't you coming?" I asked him, Naruto just started mumbling as he stared at me.
"Dude...ette." He stated, I looked at him...hard. "I cannot go in there!" He pointed at the academy.
"Why, is it cursed?" I asked sarcastically.
"NARUTO!!!!!!!" Someone screamed from an open window.
"No..." Naruto groaned "I am!"
ARGH, what a shitty beginning!! XD

Wowzers though, first chapter is finished...hope you guys like.
ARGH, the title...is sooooooooo shitty. I couldn't think of anything else (if you guys get any ideas just tell me, ok?)
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SweetKey Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
Cool beging! I'm liking the story so far.
:lol: It was funny.
*Sits at computer and waits for next chapter* I haven't read a good Naruto fan fict in a while.
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2007   Writer
Thank you so much
Naruto fanfics are so much more fun with OC's and Crossovers!
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SweetKey Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, tis true. I had this VERY LONG Naruto fanfict. I've never finished writting it.
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Owlpaw411 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007  Student Interface Designer
Hey, I like the intro!! It's COOL...And Zazie kicks ass XDDD. *is looking forward to CHAPTAH TWOOOOOOO XD*
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
*DANCES IN CIRCLE* I saw Evan Almighty!! So funny
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Owlpaw411 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007  Student Interface Designer
You saw Evan Almighty?!?! YOU LUCKY FEMALE PERVY SAGE YOU!!!!!! *sulks LOL*
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2007   Writer
XDD
Yes, and it was so funny!!
I LURVE UR AVVIE...but mine is cooler!
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Owlpaw411 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007  Student Interface Designer
I love yours too!!! And thanks!
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007   Writer
Oh MAILE FLANNAGAN was in EVAN ALMIGHTY, To Erin (H.) I was like "OMG that's the lady who does the voice of Naruto!!" And Charlie acted like a total asshole (like, he was asking me why I was mad at him and shit)
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Owlpaw411 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007  Student Interface Designer
*Urk*....MAILE FLANAGAN!!! *Dies!* XD
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007   Writer
I know...Charlie also called me gay...I called him a man-whore again
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vivime Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2007
this is awsoooome!!!!
i wanna read more and more!!!
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
Thanks, I wrote 2 chapters last night so I will get to typing it as soon as I can!
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ChibiSakuraChan Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2007
:lmao: wow that was to cool *gets on hands knee's* please i would like some more :please: lol and i like the title ^^
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
I wrote chapter 2 and 3 last night (I will post it later)
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ChibiSakuraChan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007
yay!! :dance::dance::dance::dance::dance: More more more!! hehe cant wait
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
*dances*
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ChibiSakuraChan Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007
^^ lol
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LightWestern Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2007
*roots for ninja academy*
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
XD
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LittleXBlackXFlower Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2007
AAAAAHAHAAHAHA! *cracks up*

i luffs it. OH i drew zazie for you! remind me to scan it! :XD:
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
SCAN IT SCAN IT!! CX
Thank you so much
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LittleXBlackXFlower Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007
I will soon! You're very welcome!
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light-of-the-world1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2007   Writer
YAY!
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